http://belles_letres_x.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] belles-letres-x.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hardparade 2007-06-29 10:10 am (UTC)

O: this was amazing!
your characterization is spot on - I love the hints at charles still caring. (:
it's exactly like I imagine things would have gone on.
"She will still be able to smell him - not the heavy, sultry, damp alcoholic scent that she associated with bunny and destruction and the scars on her arm, but the simple smell of her boy twin brother; lazy, quiet, warm and soft like safety."
that like KILLED me! in a good way, of course. ;)
this was just fantastic, thanks so much for sharing!

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