Yeah, I just love this fic! I don't think your characterisation is iffy at all, but I know what you mean about writing them as they were younger because that was all you had to go on at the time, so you were only imagining their older selves. I think you got them pretty right, to be honest.
I'm surprised you regret making Anna a virgin. I mean, not that I have any opinions on whether she is one in real life or not, but I kind of think both are equally possible, and either way she'd be pretty non-plussed about it, which is why I love the way you wrote it in this fic, almost as a sidenote. What do you think is unrealistic though - her being a virgin at all, or that she would lose it with Will?
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I don't think your characterisation is iffy at all, but I know what you mean about writing them as they were younger because that was all you had to go on at the time, so you were only imagining their older selves. I think you got them pretty right, to be honest.
I'm surprised you regret making Anna a virgin. I mean, not that I have any opinions on whether she is one in real life or not, but I kind of think both are equally possible, and either way she'd be pretty non-plussed about it, which is why I love the way you wrote it in this fic, almost as a sidenote. What do you think is unrealistic though - her being a virgin at all, or that she would lose it with Will?