ext_277101 ([identity profile] jacosta3.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hardparade 2007-06-07 09:43 am (UTC)

That was very, very good. Great. You put us inside Craig's head so strongly and I can completely see him in that moment with John Paul, knowing how good this is, even as every fiber of him may want to pretend otherwise. And I like how you really detailed the sex part of it as what is so good as well.

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