HEE I KIND OF LIKE THAT IT MADE YOU BLUSH, AWW. Thank you for this comment bb. ♥ I'm glad you liked it!!
Wow the elevator thing, weeeeird. You are actually psychic, aren't you? I don't even know why I had it start there, I think I just like the idea of Things Happening in elevators.
OF COURSE I GAVE BEN MORALITY. I DO BELIEVE HE HAS IT. I HOPE SO, ANYWAY. But thank you, I'm glad you thought I handled it well - it was tricky because, like, he is DOING this, so he's not the greatest person in the world, but it doesn't mean he's completely oblivious to what it means for her and all of that. AND ROMANCE. YAY.
That whole 'fuck her regardless of her feelings' thing, I'm a bit confused about what you mean? He's panicking that she thinks he's going to fuck her regardless of her feelings, because he's just gotten out a condom after saying he wouldn't have sex with her and she doesn't know what's going on. And so he's feeling bad that she might be thinking that way, when that's not the case. :/ Did that not come across right at all?
I'M GLAD YOU LIKED (OR BLUSHED AT, WHATEVER) THAT WHOLE FUN-WITH-GEORGIE THING. I was like godddd does this just sound immensely creepy or inappropriate? But it seemed to make sense in my head, because, like, they're not a pairing who would get all SRS BSNS about sexual activity, they would just have fun with it. Idk.
The idea of him going down on her only came to me partway through and the second I thought of it I was like OH GOD YES, THAT NEEDS TO HAPPEN. I don't know why but it's like...a crazily hot thought oh god. I'm glad it's not just me.
DEFINITELY A LOVE STORY. I just wanted to experiment with the smut, basically, but the love will always come through. XD
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Wow the elevator thing, weeeeird. You are actually psychic, aren't you? I don't even know why I had it start there, I think I just like the idea of Things Happening in elevators.
OF COURSE I GAVE BEN MORALITY. I DO BELIEVE HE HAS IT. I HOPE SO, ANYWAY. But thank you, I'm glad you thought I handled it well - it was tricky because, like, he is DOING this, so he's not the greatest person in the world, but it doesn't mean he's completely oblivious to what it means for her and all of that. AND ROMANCE. YAY.
That whole 'fuck her regardless of her feelings' thing, I'm a bit confused about what you mean? He's panicking that she thinks he's going to fuck her regardless of her feelings, because he's just gotten out a condom after saying he wouldn't have sex with her and she doesn't know what's going on. And so he's feeling bad that she might be thinking that way, when that's not the case. :/ Did that not come across right at all?
I'M GLAD YOU LIKED (OR BLUSHED AT, WHATEVER) THAT WHOLE FUN-WITH-GEORGIE THING. I was like godddd does this just sound immensely creepy or inappropriate? But it seemed to make sense in my head, because, like, they're not a pairing who would get all SRS BSNS about sexual activity, they would just have fun with it. Idk.
The idea of him going down on her only came to me partway through and the second I thought of it I was like OH GOD YES, THAT NEEDS TO HAPPEN. I don't know why but it's like...a crazily hot thought oh god. I'm glad it's not just me.
DEFINITELY A LOVE STORY. I just wanted to experiment with the smut, basically, but the love will always come through. XD