I think maybe I was just thinking too hard about that wording thing...maybe expecting the sentence to be formed in a way it wasn't, and then being confused when it was different? IDK I think it's just me with that one.
And yeah it is crazily hot. IT WOULD HAVE BEEN THE FIRST THING ON MY MIND HAD I BEEN WRITING IT ACTUALLY, NEGL. I would have ended up sitting and writing it FIRST and then felt like, "Okay, so how am I even going to integrate this into the rest of it? Should it have a beginning that comes before this? Should I even try?" I think that's what happened with the Ollivander/Luna thing to be honest. Oh dear.
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And yeah it is crazily hot. IT WOULD HAVE BEEN THE FIRST THING ON MY MIND HAD I BEEN WRITING IT ACTUALLY, NEGL. I would have ended up sitting and writing it FIRST and then felt like, "Okay, so how am I even going to integrate this into the rest of it? Should it have a beginning that comes before this? Should I even try?" I think that's what happened with the Ollivander/Luna thing to be honest. Oh dear.
:)