Gahhh I'm so glad you liked it, considering it's ALL YOUR FAULT that it exists in the first place. I'm glad you thought the DP was well-done, I've written it before but with a girl in the middle so it was a little less intense. SO glad that slutty!Edward was believable, and I totally get what you mean - so often it can come across like someone's being slutty for show, like putting it on and it seems over the top, but I wanted to make it clear that Edward was kind of innocently slutty. Which sounds ridiculous, but I mean - because the twins are kind of in their own bubble and not really aware of what shame is, Edward is just responding to a thing that feels nice and he's being open about wanting more because he sees no reason NOT to be, and it's not about showing off or trying to make himself seem more desirable. /overanalysis
Yay, glad you liked Noel too. I didn't want him to be TOO "WHAT" about it all because it was going to slow things down, but at the same time, y'know...anyone would have a few moments of stunned disbelief, I think, in that situation. Man, I love Noel Fielding. I should write him more often.
PEOPLE KEEP PICKING OUT LINES THAT I WASN'T SURE ABOUT. I love it when that happens.
Hahahaha. Tbh I am relieved that Russell Brand scares you, because otherwise you might start encouraging me to go down that route and then I think it would all be even more downhill from there. I CAN'T WRITE MORE OF THIS, OH GOD. I really have to just stop. I do want to write more Jedward but NOEL, YOU CAN GO NOW OKAY? Although the idea of the twins just being like "hay actually Noel be our boyfriend okay" during something outrageously kinky is definitely something I can see.
ALL YOUR FAULT. :P I THINK WE ARE JUST AS BAD AS EACH OTHER AT THIS POINT.
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Gahhh I'm so glad you liked it, considering it's ALL YOUR FAULT that it exists in the first place. I'm glad you thought the DP was well-done, I've written it before but with a girl in the middle so it was a little less intense. SO glad that slutty!Edward was believable, and I totally get what you mean - so often it can come across like someone's being slutty for show, like putting it on and it seems over the top, but I wanted to make it clear that Edward was kind of innocently slutty. Which sounds ridiculous, but I mean - because the twins are kind of in their own bubble and not really aware of what shame is, Edward is just responding to a thing that feels nice and he's being open about wanting more because he sees no reason NOT to be, and it's not about showing off or trying to make himself seem more desirable. /overanalysis
Yay, glad you liked Noel too. I didn't want him to be TOO "WHAT" about it all because it was going to slow things down, but at the same time, y'know...anyone would have a few moments of stunned disbelief, I think, in that situation. Man, I love Noel Fielding. I should write him more often.
PEOPLE KEEP PICKING OUT LINES THAT I WASN'T SURE ABOUT. I love it when that happens.
Hahahaha. Tbh I am relieved that Russell Brand scares you, because otherwise you might start encouraging me to go down that route and then I think it would all be even more downhill from there. I CAN'T WRITE MORE OF THIS, OH GOD. I really have to just stop. I do want to write more Jedward but NOEL, YOU CAN GO NOW OKAY? Although the idea of the twins just being like "hay actually Noel be our boyfriend okay" during something outrageously kinky is definitely something I can see.
ALL YOUR FAULT. :P I THINK WE ARE JUST AS BAD AS EACH OTHER AT THIS POINT.