ext_105687 ([identity profile] snowym.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hardparade 2011-12-22 03:37 pm (UTC)

This was... gosh, this was really, really lovely. I usually say fics are cute or great or lovely, but I need to add several thousand "really"s in front to express how really lovely this was.

Also, best line:
"All right," he says, "3am staring contest, you're on."

I laughed so hard when I read that line, and I'm so happy they could fall so entertainingly into their relationship. It suits them :D.

I was actually hoping the numbered sections would go on and on and on, and I'd just continue reading for hours. It stopped at just section 5, though, so I hope you'll find some more random inspiration and add a few more parts sometime ^_^. It's just so well written and delightfully laid-back. You definitely did them justice, so you shouldn't have any characterization worries <3.

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