do i even have to list the reasons? it's everything those comments above me mentioned. your characterisation of arrogant, sexy Alex and timid Charlie. so believable. and the way their relationship changed, not in a rushed way but slowly and very very naturally. and shit, a few paragraphs into this i knew i would never want this story to end but then i see the word in bold at the end i'm just like, WHYYYYYYYY *tears* and do i have to mention how hilarious it was when Alex shouted "YOU MEAN, ME SUCKING YOU COCK?" and it's in caps and it totally had me rofling. one last thing, i've never really read a cherimon porn this long and still so fucking beautiful. and not just a PWP, but with witty conversations and the right balance between Alex's horniness and Charlie's shyness and damn i'm repeating myself aren't i? lol i'm such a bad commenter when it comes to epic fics like this *facepalm*
but srsly this deserves more praise than 9 comments.
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do i even have to list the reasons? it's everything those comments above me mentioned. your characterisation of arrogant, sexy Alex and timid Charlie. so believable. and the way their relationship changed, not in a rushed way but slowly and very very naturally. and shit, a few paragraphs into this i knew i would never want this story to end but then i see the word in bold at the end i'm just like, WHYYYYYYYY *tears* and do i have to mention how hilarious it was when Alex shouted "YOU MEAN, ME SUCKING YOU COCK?" and it's in caps and it totally had me rofling. one last thing, i've never really read a cherimon porn this long and still so fucking beautiful. and not just a PWP, but with witty conversations and the right balance between Alex's horniness and Charlie's shyness and damn i'm repeating myself aren't i? lol i'm such a bad commenter when it comes to epic fics like this *facepalm*
but srsly this deserves more praise than 9 comments.