It's true that people don't really write about sex being embarrassing - I didn't really realise how unusual that was until I started writing this. I do often write people being a bit blushy and awkward but not to this extent, and it made it kind of interesting to write, and felt more realistic somehow. Particularly because, in a sexual context, that just is Charlie to me. (And yeah, the thumb-sucking thing is a bit of a kink of mine as well! Glad you appreciated that. XD)
Yeah, about halfway through I suddenly started worrying about whether or not I should include some of Charlie's POV, but it didn't seem like it would work! It was a lot easier to tell it through Alex's eyes because he was much more relaxed and familiar with the whole thing, and didn't have anything sort of clouding his observation. I would like to write from Charlie's POV at some point though!
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It's true that people don't really write about sex being embarrassing - I didn't really realise how unusual that was until I started writing this. I do often write people being a bit blushy and awkward but not to this extent, and it made it kind of interesting to write, and felt more realistic somehow. Particularly because, in a sexual context, that just is Charlie to me. (And yeah, the thumb-sucking thing is a bit of a kink of mine as well! Glad you appreciated that. XD)
Yeah, about halfway through I suddenly started worrying about whether or not I should include some of Charlie's POV, but it didn't seem like it would work! It was a lot easier to tell it through Alex's eyes because he was much more relaxed and familiar with the whole thing, and didn't have anything sort of clouding his observation. I would like to write from Charlie's POV at some point though!