Thank you for responding. Yes, the story was very complex, and yet simple (in a good way). You made their emotions seem believable, and made sure we saw their good and their bad.

I read your Craig/John Paul story, but I'm always so glad to see fic besides that (even though I love JPC). This show has so many interesting slash relationships.

And if you ever write a sequel to this, you'll have one reader for sure.