EEE. Thank you so much for this comment, it is incredible, honestly. The idea of you reading this TWICE is just, making me grin like a crazy person. ♥

I adore detailed comments like this, I love knowing what particular things people enjoyed, so thank you. I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and that you think I've got their voices right and everything seems believable etc etc.

I will definitely be writing more. I've started already, it might take a while, but it will happen. *is tempted by cookies*

And I know how you feel, I was totally a loyal Will/Skandar shipper at first and then out of nowhere the threesome plot bunny bit me, and this happened! I'm still not into reading Will/Anna or Skandar/Anna separately, really, but I'm definitely more intrigued by the idea than I ever was, so I can sympathise with the confusion of the sudden new ships, hee. :)