ext_227032 ([identity profile] prunesquallormd.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hardparade 2010-10-17 12:27 pm (UTC)

OH MY GOD.
That was wonderful.
A little bit wrong, but mostly funny, and sweet and OMFG HOT.
Skandar is hilarious ("In my defence," he says, "I am very, very drunk." made me giggle so hard. Yes, Skandar, that defence always holds up :p), and also *cough*blush* really fucking lucky :D
I've always loved the way you write Anna. There's something about her sweetness, the way she's so caring of the people around her, to the point of bossiness. It's just really lovely. And that combined with the way that seems to be rather straight-laced makes the other things so much more wonderful. I find it a little hard to watch her in the films now without remembering how many times I've pictured her come (*blushes furiously* I"M SO GOING TO HELL D:).
And Ben, all confused and WTF IS THIS? and then just going with it because he really can't figure out what to do otherwise, and he just really needs to *ahem* get to where he's going, even if Skandar's got his eyes fixed on him while he's getting there.

Also, the last line is PERFECT. BAD SKANDAR :P

So yeah, lovely, sweet, hot and just a little bit wrong. Pretty much the perfect mix! :D

Thank you ♥

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