OKAY, so I will try to leave you a better comment when I don't have ten bagillion things to do, but THIS IS AMAZING, BB, OMG. Like, a little disturbing? Sure. Something I would have read if it wasn't you? Absolutely not. But you sure as hell got the point across, and you dealt with the underage thing really ridiculously well, and it's so well written and not excessive or gratuitous at all. All three of them are real and complex and this is utterly believable. I think you did a really good job with addressing what could be squickish about it and not shying away from anything and turning it into a completely gorgeous fic.

LOL sorry this sounds like an essay analysis, but you seem really nervous about it and you shouldn't be!

There were a lot of other little things I really liked that helped with the depth and realism of it, but srsly, I will try to give you better feedback when I have time. Just know for now that I definitely love this. Not in the usual way, but it's like its own mature genre of fic and I can't really describe it but it's GOOD.