Sorry it took me so long to comment, I read it twice and after that I proceded to watch all of the Lolita films, (inclueding the one with natalie portman when she was a kid. have you seen it? she's adorable in it.) and compleatly creep myself out. Then I read it again, this time while listening to the Lolita 1997 soundtrack, and creeped myself the fuck out, again, and just GAH.
THE CAR RIDE! AND THE HOTEL ROOMS! THE FUCKING HOTEL ROOMS! THE PARALLELS ARE KILLING ME. I CAN NOT HANDLE IT. YOU DID THAT ON PURPOSE, DIDN'T YOU? AND THE "SEE YOU LATTER ALLIGATER" PART? I NEARLY FELL OUT OF MY CHAIR. I DO NOT EVEN HAVE WORDS. AND THIS PART:
When she re-enters the room, Georgie is already in bed, tucked in, face smiling at her from a fluffed-up pillow.
THE PARALLELS! I CAN NOT HANDLE IT.
I just, okay breathe, I LOVED THIS. Like alot. It gives me this uneasy feeling in the pit of my stomach, but like, in a good way. Your writing is fantastic, and you constantly amaze me with it.
Okay, so things I loved: - Andrew. I have a newfound love for Andrew so everything he does is magic, pretty much. I loved him being all paternal and adorable with the umbrella in the beginning. - Skandar and Georgie holding hands at the premire! How adorable are they? - The flashback with Georgie telling Anna she fancied her. It felt incredibly realistic. It's like how little kids always want to marry thier older brothers and sisters. (like, i'm the oldest so i never wanted to marry my older brothers or sisters, but i distinctly remember wanting to marry my older cousin, and my brothers used to say they wanted to marry me all the time when they were really little, and, okay, they're like 7, so they still are really little, but i digress). I remember you wrote some personal cannon about how Peter wanted to marry Nathan when they were little because he "loved him the best" and so, yeah, it's like that. I also like the part where Will is talking about the people Georgie fancies, it, like I said, felt really realistic. - I also remeber another bit of personal cannon about how after some incident during Wardrobe Will and Anna and Skandar where totally comfortable with nakedness around eachother and I've always loved that, even if none of them ever ended up together, it still felt right, and you could really feel that comfortablness in this. Like the bit with Will and Anna where she walks in on him crying, I mean it obviously wasn't comfortable, but it was strangely... idk. I mean, something like that is kind of a big deal, and it was a big deal for them, but also kind of not, because they're them, you know? It kind of showed how amazing thier frindship is, in a really fucked up kind of way. I'm not sure that makes any sense. - Skandar, being totally hilarious and also, like, remphasizing that the nakedness is so not an issue. - GEORGIE. LOLITA. HUMBERT. FUCK. - Skandar, reading Woman and Home and talking about Hamlet. I kind of get the feeling that he kind of knows whats going on here? Like, not really, but idk. It also feels like he and Anna are having a compleate role reversal, which is bizzare. - The car ride. THE CAR RIDE! IT BREAKS MY BRAIN. - Georgie wearing bright purple tights. - On Wednesday, I think. Except it might be Thursday. I love this quote. Idk why. - Georgie sticking out her tounge and twisting her legs, and the lip gloss, and the hugs! Her being so carefuly caulculating in her carelessness. It's very Lolita.
LONGEST COMMENT EVER. OOPS PART ONE.
Sorry it took me so long to comment, I read it twice and after that I proceded to watch all of the Lolita films, (inclueding the one with natalie portman when she was a kid. have you seen it? she's adorable in it.) and compleatly creep myself out. Then I read it again, this time while listening to the Lolita 1997 soundtrack, and creeped myself the fuck out, again, and just GAH.
THE CAR RIDE! AND THE HOTEL ROOMS! THE FUCKING HOTEL ROOMS! THE PARALLELS ARE KILLING ME. I CAN NOT HANDLE IT. YOU DID THAT ON PURPOSE, DIDN'T YOU? AND THE "SEE YOU LATTER ALLIGATER" PART? I NEARLY FELL OUT OF MY CHAIR. I DO NOT EVEN HAVE WORDS. AND THIS PART:
When she re-enters the room, Georgie is already in bed, tucked in, face smiling at her from a fluffed-up pillow.
THE PARALLELS! I CAN NOT HANDLE IT.
I just, okay breathe, I LOVED THIS. Like alot. It gives me this uneasy feeling in the pit of my stomach, but like, in a good way. Your writing is fantastic, and you constantly amaze me with it.
Okay, so things I loved:
- Andrew. I have a newfound love for Andrew so everything he does is magic, pretty much. I loved him being all paternal and adorable with the umbrella in the beginning.
- Skandar and Georgie holding hands at the premire! How adorable are they?
- The flashback with Georgie telling Anna she fancied her. It felt incredibly realistic. It's like how little kids always want to marry thier older brothers and sisters. (like, i'm the oldest so i never wanted to marry my older brothers or sisters, but i distinctly remember wanting to marry my older cousin, and my brothers used to say they wanted to marry me all the time when they were really little, and, okay, they're like 7, so they still are really little, but i digress). I remember you wrote some personal cannon about how Peter wanted to marry Nathan when they were little because he "loved him the best" and so, yeah, it's like that. I also like the part where Will is talking about the people Georgie fancies, it, like I said, felt really realistic.
- I also remeber another bit of personal cannon about how after some incident during Wardrobe Will and Anna and Skandar where totally comfortable with nakedness around eachother and I've always loved that, even if none of them ever ended up together, it still felt right, and you could really feel that comfortablness in this. Like the bit with Will and Anna where she walks in on him crying, I mean it obviously wasn't comfortable, but it was strangely... idk. I mean, something like that is kind of a big deal, and it was a big deal for them, but also kind of not, because they're them, you know? It kind of showed how amazing thier frindship is, in a really fucked up kind of way. I'm not sure that makes any sense.
- Skandar, being totally hilarious and also, like, remphasizing that the nakedness is so not an issue.
- GEORGIE. LOLITA. HUMBERT. FUCK.
- Skandar, reading Woman and Home and talking about Hamlet. I kind of get the feeling that he kind of knows whats going on here? Like, not really, but idk. It also feels like he and Anna are having a compleate role reversal, which is bizzare.
- The car ride. THE CAR RIDE! IT BREAKS MY BRAIN.
- Georgie wearing bright purple tights.
- On Wednesday, I think. Except it might be Thursday. I love this quote. Idk why.
- Georgie sticking out her tounge and twisting her legs, and the lip gloss, and the hugs! Her being so carefuly caulculating in her carelessness. It's very Lolita.