ext_64937 ([identity profile] immaculate-beam.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hardparade 2009-04-16 04:02 am (UTC)

Oh, praise Jesus, you wrote it!

K, here we go...

It was so perfect Nick couldn't believe it and the next day he heard Joe talking to their Dad, his voice quietly angry in a way Nick hadn't remembered hearing it before, like he was making the hugest effort to stay in control of himself. He heard Nick's song and really means something to—us (hesitation all Joe's) Yes. That is how it would happen. Joe would be SO defensive and all protective. And the pause before the "Us"...so true. They are like, ONE or something.

He doesn't finish the question but Nick's nodding anyway, almost exasperatedly because whatever Joe asks Nick'll give it to him, and doesn't Joe know that? Yes he will and he does. BECAUSE THEY ARE LOVERS.

Okay, I know they do share beds a lot like, for realsies...and I love how you incorporated that before even introducing the sex. I can actually see them sharing just because they are so close. Anywho...

They way you describe Nick's hesitation to kiss Joe, how he's so conflicted, is spot on. Nick is always so...Idk, cautious? I don't like how that sounds, but that's sort of it.

The silence betweent them being comfortable...yeppers. Because they only have to speak ~HALF~ of what they mean, of course they just KNOW. The awkwardness in the bathroom is adorable, as well. That's like, the ideal smut for me, because they WOULD be clumsy. It's cute, too! :D

Okay. My conclusion: they are cute and telepathic; Nick is careful, an old soul, and Joe is impulsive and always needing to push the envelope. THAT'S WHY THEY'RE SOUL MATES!!!


So, yeah. This is my favourite fic of yours since the Will/Skandar/Nick one. (The name escapes my mind, BUT I HAVE IT MEMMED, OKAY!)

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