ext_64893 ([identity profile] jljso.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hardparade 2009-04-17 04:31 am (UTC)

"Morning," Joe yawns. He has sleep in the corner of one eye and a little bit of drool next to his mouth. "You still kick, dude, I think I have bruises."

Most favorite part!

Really my review is going to be so incredibly weak compared to some of these others, however I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. KOL are the best. JB are the best. And you mashed the two best things together. And it was perfect. The image of Joe and Nick curled up in a bunk, sharing headphones and chilling out to KOL was so great.

So much greatness in this story in general - "Joe sort of nuzzles into Nick's shoulder" (I love the word nuzzle! Especially when it relates to Joe and Nick!), "They just—they share stuff. Feelings, even." and "'Cause...Nicky, this is weird," - all those lines really stuck out to me.

I'm so excited to hopefully read more from you : )

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