Wow. That was incredible. You write teenage boy amazingly. I love how he's so confused and in his flashbacks he thinks about how wrong he felt and how it's even wrong now, but differently. i love how he got angry and that drove him on. This was really awesome writing. Loved it!
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2010-12-16 01:24 am (UTC)