Your writing style is amazing and this is my eternal OTP, so you have absolutely blown my world apart. :D :D :D
The disc art is AWESOME!!! And the music is perfect OMGWTFBBQ! *spazdies*
01. It almost doesn't matter that he can't.
I love that this line absolutely sets the mood for the rest of the story.
02. "Gideon wasn't always right."
Oh-dear-god! The desperate need for hope kills me. It's awful!
03. scribbles Nathan a note and leaves him a key and then goes.
I love this. He desperately doesn't want to admit that he's doing this, and the faster he gets out, the less real it is.
04. Nathan has a hunger for it—for knives and blood and pain—and he'll express his urges any way he can.
Unnnghhh. YES.
05. Until he starts walking right on past and ending up at Dr. Reid's apartment, instead.
I'm so afraid to be hopeful, but I can't help myself.
06.
I can't select any part of this because it's all perfect. The desperate need to share the horrors with someone, and to have someone there who is capable of hearing all those things without running must be the most relieving thing.
07. Reid is quiet—he always is, picking his words carefully, never sure how much he wants to admit to Nathan or even to himself.
Even to himself is the most brilliant part.
08. Thoughts manifest themselves in the background of other thoughts, grow from tiny seeds into tall trees in the blink of an eye and then it's too late. You can't uproot them.
THIS.
09. Nathan is excited, furiously excited, thinking of Reid helpless and hurt, tied to a chair and whipped and beaten and drugged against his will, and Reid feels disgust roiling in the base of his belly but he can't stop talking, because the relief he feels from finally voicing his suffering just simply outweighs it. (And maybe, somewhere, there's a little bit of a thrill at producing this sort of reaction in somebody, but he won't acknowledge that, he won't he won't he won't—)
THIS, OMG, THIS - I love when an author delves into Reid's darkness. I love how he fights the reason he's such a good profiler. That's my favorite Reid. :)
10. He wanted Reid to know just how bad it was.
It would be so easy just to call him a crazy psychopath and dismiss the boy that doesn't want to be.
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Date: 2011-03-24 03:25 am (UTC)Your writing style is amazing and this is my eternal OTP, so you have absolutely blown my world apart. :D :D :D
The disc art is AWESOME!!! And the music is perfect OMGWTFBBQ! *spazdies*
01. It almost doesn't matter that he can't.
I love that this line absolutely sets the mood for the rest of the story.
02. "Gideon wasn't always right."
Oh-dear-god! The desperate need for hope kills me. It's awful!
03. scribbles Nathan a note and leaves him a key and then goes.
I love this. He desperately doesn't want to admit that he's doing this, and the faster he gets out, the less real it is.
04. Nathan has a hunger for it—for knives and blood and pain—and he'll express his urges any way he can.
Unnnghhh. YES.
05. Until he starts walking right on past and ending up at Dr. Reid's apartment, instead.
I'm so afraid to be hopeful, but I can't help myself.
06.
I can't select any part of this because it's all perfect. The desperate need to share the horrors with someone, and to have someone there who is capable of hearing all those things without running must be the most relieving thing.
07. Reid is quiet—he always is, picking his words carefully, never sure how much he wants to admit to Nathan or even to himself.
Even to himself is the most brilliant part.
08. Thoughts manifest themselves in the background of other thoughts, grow from tiny seeds into tall trees in the blink of an eye and then it's too late. You can't uproot them.
THIS.
09. Nathan is excited, furiously excited, thinking of Reid helpless and hurt, tied to a chair and whipped and beaten and drugged against his will, and Reid feels disgust roiling in the base of his belly but he can't stop talking, because the relief he feels from finally voicing his suffering just simply outweighs it. (And maybe, somewhere, there's a little bit of a thrill at producing this sort of reaction in somebody, but he won't acknowledge that, he won't he won't he won't—)
THIS, OMG, THIS - I love when an author delves into Reid's darkness. I love how he fights the reason he's such a good profiler. That's my favorite Reid. :)
10. He wanted Reid to know just how bad it was.
It would be so easy just to call him a crazy psychopath and dismiss the boy that doesn't want to be.