Hee! Most of what it comes up with is just total gobbledigook, to be fair.
I still need to write crossdressing!Ben. Preferably with strap-on!Georgie. ;)
Yessss, I was enjoying that too. I like how it could have put anyone with Keira but it focused on the girls!! And hnng I like the idea of the 'them' in that bit you quoted being both Anna and Georgie. *basks in the lovely mental images*
Lol! It was the 'pubic hair' that seemed a bit jarring - like, 'having Skandar between his legs' maybe, but to specify the pubic hair seemed odd. I wonder which two sentences were smushed together there.
In retrospect, that last one might be an actual line from the James/Keira/Ben fic? I'm not sure, but there's nothing that seemed mixed up about it. It was just that it came right after the other line about someone getting ready for him, and I was already thinking of Georgie...
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Date: 2011-06-30 10:59 am (UTC)I still need to write crossdressing!Ben. Preferably with strap-on!Georgie. ;)
Yessss, I was enjoying that too. I like how it could have put anyone with Keira but it focused on the girls!! And hnng I like the idea of the 'them' in that bit you quoted being both Anna and Georgie. *basks in the lovely mental images*
Lol! It was the 'pubic hair' that seemed a bit jarring - like, 'having Skandar between his legs' maybe, but to specify the pubic hair seemed odd. I wonder which two sentences were smushed together there.
In retrospect, that last one might be an actual line from the James/Keira/Ben fic? I'm not sure, but there's nothing that seemed mixed up about it. It was just that it came right after the other line about someone getting ready for him, and I was already thinking of Georgie...