!!! This is amazing. You make it feel so real. I love all the details of their relationship together, and you've captured the lust and the neediness brimming between them so well. I love how you've written them to see so innocent about the kinks they're into, not really understanding what makes them kinky. It's really interesting. And very cute, and a very compelling read.
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Date: 2011-09-09 10:03 am (UTC)