This was amazing. I really loved it. I love how awkward they are with each other and how Alex is so desperate to know more about Charlie, and how they're gradually forced to rethink their relationship. The first section was really cute. I loved how awkward it was and how much Charlie was trying to seem cool to Alex. I can completely imagine that. I really like Alex's observation on Charlie, how he's thinking about what makes him uncomfortable and what makes him tick all the time. It's really sweet. I like how it's obvious that Alex is really interested in Charlie, but Alex doesn't seem to realise at all himself, he just thinks he's observing. Cute. I love how this story developed into them together in Amsterdam as well. Amsterdam seemed like such a perfect place for them to get together, and I really liked how that worked out. Your descriptions of their hand-job were really hot too. Such a lovely story--so sweet and so intimate!
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Date: 2011-12-21 08:39 am (UTC)This was amazing. I really loved it. I love how awkward they are with each other and how Alex is so desperate to know more about Charlie, and how they're gradually forced to rethink their relationship. The first section was really cute. I loved how awkward it was and how much Charlie was trying to seem cool to Alex. I can completely imagine that. I really like Alex's observation on Charlie, how he's thinking about what makes him uncomfortable and what makes him tick all the time. It's really sweet. I like how it's obvious that Alex is really interested in Charlie, but Alex doesn't seem to realise at all himself, he just thinks he's observing. Cute. I love how this story developed into them together in Amsterdam as well. Amsterdam seemed like such a perfect place for them to get together, and I really liked how that worked out. Your descriptions of their hand-job were really hot too. Such a lovely story--so sweet and so intimate!