Oh this is...I want to not like it, I want to think 'eww', but I can't: it's wonderful. I love how you've paced it, the progression seems very natural (perhaps 'natural' is the wrong word...). And the different ways Rhys is thinking about Josh and Beth is really interesting. And using Hannah as an excuse. Hell, all of it was gorgeous.
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Date: 2007-10-26 12:04 am (UTC)I love how you've paced it, the progression seems very natural (perhaps 'natural' is the wrong word...). And the different ways Rhys is thinking about Josh and Beth is really interesting. And using Hannah as an excuse. Hell, all of it was gorgeous.