GUH I think you kind of broke me, but in a really, really good way :D
The last line is kind of sad and ominous, because I really want them to be all sorts of cute and hot and adorable together, forever. But then, of course, reality must rear it's ugly head sometimes, even in such lovely, hot and gorgeously written smut. It seems to make sense that Anna would be the one who's most likely to worry about what this all means, and how it can't just be sex for it's own sake, especially when it's with people you care about deeply.
Oh, and I'm just going to put it out there: the last part of the sex scene, with Will on his back and Anna fucking him, and Skandar inside Anna. I have no words for how hot and lovely and just guh that was. asdflkjl;asdflj. That is all.
(Erm, yeah, you might have noticed that I have every intention of leaving comments on every part of this as I read them. Sorry 'bout that. Hope you don't mind :D)
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Date: 2010-07-15 07:33 pm (UTC)I think you kind of broke me, but in a really, really good way :D
The last line is kind of sad and ominous, because I really want them to be all sorts of cute and hot and adorable together, forever. But then, of course, reality must rear it's ugly head sometimes, even in such lovely, hot and gorgeously written smut. It seems to make sense that Anna would be the one who's most likely to worry about what this all means, and how it can't just be sex for it's own sake, especially when it's with people you care about deeply.
Oh, and I'm just going to put it out there: the last part of the sex scene, with Will on his back and Anna fucking him, and Skandar inside Anna. I have no words for how hot and lovely and just guh that was. asdflkjl;asdflj.
That is all.
(Erm, yeah, you might have noticed that I have every intention of leaving comments on every part of this as I read them. Sorry 'bout that. Hope you don't mind :D)