Fan-frickin-tastic! As the person above me said, I love the bit about catching herself staring 'like a guy' - I think the same thing when I do it!
I love that Effy a) knows what she's doing, b) is neither insulting nor pitying Emily, and c) seems to really want to get off with her too. The contrast of Naomi freaking out from touching her with Effy's lusty "Fuck, you're so wet" is a thing of beauty - I don't want to be all after-school special here, but I think Emily needs that idea reinforced, that, no, there's nothing wrong with her arousal, her desire for someone to touch her, and her desire to touch someone else as well. And the way you wrote Effy, while there are no major revelations, is just so herand so me! - sexuality is fluid, everyone wants to get off, and there's nothing wrong or icky about your own physical needs or someone else's just because of their gender.
Did that make any sense? I really need to stop reading/making long rambly comments at 3am.
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Date: 2009-02-24 08:13 am (UTC)OK, have read.
Holy thud!
Fan-frickin-tastic! As the person above me said, I love the bit about catching herself staring 'like a guy' - I think the same thing when I do it!
I love that Effy a) knows what she's doing, b) is neither insulting nor pitying Emily, and c) seems to really want to get off with her too. The contrast of Naomi freaking out from touching her with Effy's lusty "Fuck, you're so wet" is a thing of beauty - I don't want to be all after-school special here, but I think Emily needs that idea reinforced, that, no, there's nothing wrong with her arousal, her desire for someone to touch her, and her desire to touch someone else as well. And the way you wrote Effy, while there are no major revelations, is just so her
and so me!- sexuality is fluid, everyone wants to get off, and there's nothing wrong or icky about your own physical needs or someone else's just because of their gender.Did that make any sense? I really need to stop reading/making long rambly comments at 3am.