Lolol I love your rambling. XD Eeee thank you so much!! :D So glad you liked this.
A few people have mentioned the 'staring like a guy' thing, I just put it in because it's totally how I feel sometimes so it seemed appropriate. Apparently we all do this. XD
And, yeah, I totally had the exact same thoughts about that part when I was writing it, and I wanted the contrast to be clear but not like really really obvious, so I'm glad you picked up on it. :)
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Date: 2009-02-24 04:51 pm (UTC)A few people have mentioned the 'staring like a guy' thing, I just put it in because it's totally how I feel sometimes so it seemed appropriate. Apparently we all do this. XD
And, yeah, I totally had the exact same thoughts about that part when I was writing it, and I wanted the contrast to be clear but not like really really obvious, so I'm glad you picked up on it. :)